The Complete Story Review

Words + pictures + one very thorough second pair of eyes.

If you'd like help with both your manuscript and the visual direction of your book, this is the complete review.

I'll look at your story from two perspectives: how it reads and how it could live visually on the page.

You'll receive everything included in The Manuscript Review, plus the creative brainstorming and visual storytelling feedback included in The Illustration Ideas Review.

We'll look at the your book holistically so it achieves a cohesive flow.

Your review may explore:

• Full manuscript review and feedback

• Spelling, grammar and punctuation

• Flow, pacing and readability

• Character, dialogue and age-appropriateness

• Suggestions for strengthening the story

• Illustration ideas and visual direction

• Opportunities for visual storytelling

• Character and setting ideas

• Mood, colour and artistic direction

• Page-turn and composition ideas

• Suggestions for where illustrations could carry part of the storytelling

• Creative ideas for adding humour, emotion and visual discoveries

Up to 1,000 words